I am currently writing my first paper for English 110. This paper is about happiness. We learned about three influencers on happiness; Catherine Sanderson, Daniel Gilbert, and Robert Waldinger. In our papers, we were to write an essay on the ways to live a happy life reflecting our ideas with Sandersons, Gilberts, and Waldingers. I chose being social and having a social life as a key way of improving happiness. A great way to improve your paper is to do peer review. In our groups, we add comments to each others papers on what they need to improve on, add, what they’re doing well on, what we like about their paper, and more. For the purpose of my paper, I really appreciate peer review comments because they offer a different approach to helping improve my paper. The comments they leave in the margins allow me to see what I need to improve on, organize my paper better, and look at my paper with a new approach because there is always room for improvement. Some comments that I received were to add in more about how we benefit from happiness levels, how I can break up some of my longer sentences, and add more ideas that Sanderson and Waldinger had. I plan on using all of their comments, by doing so I plan on adding more in depth about some of the authors ideas and organizing my sentences. The result of peer review will make my paper so much better.